After reviewing the storyboard results and sorting them into categories I came to two conclusions;
- Firstly, people wanted more dialogue, especially women so I've reviewed the phone call scene between MC and SC.
- And Secondly people wanted a bit of death. This was the hardest thing to follow out as there was no death planned in the opening two minutes. I therefore decided to have a brief shot of some person in the background being taken away in a body bag. Hopefully that will do. This can emphasise imminent doom or something to that effect. Likewise we won't do this, because it's an insane idea and would take up the best part of the two minutes to do properly.